6×2 rattle

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I am sure
I was too drunk
To notice
How wonderful you were

I sat humming
Or drumming

In between the bell pattern and
rattle’s
6×2-rhythm

Somebody skin me
And excuse me
While I vomit

My last five
Exits out of society

Give me grace
Forgive my absence
And confusion

For what is human
And what is it to love?

13
It is the hour
Of vertigo
And flickering light
That makes you question
Your eyesight
Again

Cataract perhaps
Like the moon at times
Slowly dimming
Softening the world

Fear
Is a small mountain
Which below
Is a vast and endless root system
Of the Four Earth Gods

Which
In prayer
You know to be One

Screaming child
The white snow
Bleeds it’s cold hand
Around the sumac suckers

North Wind commands
Us into next season

Put your head to the Ground

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8 responses to “6×2 rattle”

  1. flutter Avatar

    glorious.

  2. lam Avatar

    hello Jacksta , wonderfull picture so moving and strange , seems like a whole world behind this unknown veil of mist , the old trees chief and sorcerers are letting me in ansd i see in between what well what’s in the cords of the kora of course ! love your poetry as well !

  3. [Prettythunder aka Jacksta] Avatar
    [Prettythunder aka Jacksta]

    i thank you both and all for continuing to read the chaos of my writ words… blessings to you kind people (smile)

    xx

  4. Nahuatl Avatar

    Hi there!How are you doing? Its been long since I came here. But I will be regular now :)See ya laterNahuatl

  5. Nahuatl Avatar

    I posted comment on your MyBlogLog page. I posted the lyrics there but it looks messed up.How do I send you the lyrics?

    Please check it. 🙂

  6. superk Avatar

    Hi Jacksta!

    Loved this poem. Loved it so much that I have a gift for you. Here it is: http://lkm696.blogspot.com/2007/12/6-x-2-rattle-by-jacksta.html

  7. [Prettythunder aka Jacksta] Avatar
    [Prettythunder aka Jacksta]

    superk:

    Thank you so much, love what you did very much. Excellent. It is magic to me. I replied on your web log.

    http://lkm696.blogspot.com/2007/12/6-x-2-rattle-by-jacksta.html

  8. superk Avatar

    i am happy you liked it. reading you out loud was fun 🙂

    hope to do it again soon 🙂

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